Thursday, October 1, 2015

I wrote your name on my arm

I wrote your name on my arm but you didn't stick around
 long enough for me to feel comfortable in short sleeves.

I wrote your name on my arm but my pen must have dried out because
I can't seem to finish the last letter. Maybe my pen is following
my mouth and my eyes example.

I wrote your name on my arm but then I remembered your
parents gave you that name along with a list of rules
regarding me.

I wrote your name on my arm but then I sat alone
on a Friday night. I thought about scraping
your name off of my arm.

I wrote your name on my arm but I didn't think twice about
dancing in the rain.

I wrote your name on my arm but tattoos are messy
and my heart has never been fond of needles.

I wrote your name on my arm but then I heard my
anatomy teachers voice saying
"all the layers of skin you can see are dead".

All the layers of skin you can see are dead,
 and I wrote your name on my arm.

24 comments:

  1. I wrote your name on my arm
    Good Prompt great great post i wish I could write like this

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  2. "I wrote your name on my arm but you didn't stick around
    long enough for me to feel comfortable in short sleeves"

    I could quote every line because they are all so good.

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  3. This is awesome. You used what we did today and freaking killed it. Poetry. Relevant. Fresh. Good job.

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  4. "I wrote your name on my arm but then I remembered your
    parents gave you that name along with a list of rules
    regarding me.

    I wrote your name on my arm but then I sat alone
    on a Friday night. I thought about scraping
    your name off of my arm.

    I wrote your name on my arm but I didn't think twice about
    dancing in the rain."

    "I wrote your name on my arm but then I heard my
    anatomy teachers voice saying
    "all the layers of skin you can see are dead".

    All the layers of skin you can see are dead,
    and I wrote your name on my arm."

    mmm this was good, those parts were my favorite ^^

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  5. Yeah this was unreal! Loved each and every line! The way you think and write is amazing!

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  6. Love it all, its so good and i love you! wanna be friends i think we could get along.

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  8. Wow. I'm speechless, your last line hit me.

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  9. Wow. I'm speechless, your last line hit me.

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  10. I was trying to choose what to quote but then realized I'd have to do the whole thing.

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  11. "All the layers of skin you can see are dead,
    and I wrote your name on my arm."

    Wow

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  12. honestly so good. and feel good that this is your SEVENTEENTH comment you are killing it.

    not that comments mean anything.

    but dont they?

    anyway, such a fan.

    beautifully written.

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  13. holy wow wow wow this is so wonderful.

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  14. This still gets me.

    "I wrote your name on my arm"

    This post cut me open and put its self inside me

    Makes me feeeeeel

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  15. Holy crap. This is seriously amazing i want to steal all of it I cant pick a favorite part!!!

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  16. Holy crap. This is seriously amazing i want to steal all of it I cant pick a favorite part!!!

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