I wrote your name on my arm but you didn't stick around
long enough for me to feel comfortable in short sleeves.
I wrote your name on my arm but my pen must have dried out because
I can't seem to finish the last letter. Maybe my pen is following
my mouth and my eyes example.
I wrote your name on my arm but then I remembered your
parents gave you that name along with a list of rules
regarding me.
I wrote your name on my arm but then I sat alone
on a Friday night. I thought about scraping
your name off of my arm.
I wrote your name on my arm but I didn't think twice about
dancing in the rain.
I wrote your name on my arm but tattoos are messy
and my heart has never been fond of needles.
I wrote your name on my arm but then I heard my
anatomy teachers voice saying
"all the layers of skin you can see are dead".
All the layers of skin you can see are dead,
and I wrote your name on my arm.
I wrote your name on my arm
ReplyDeleteGood Prompt great great post i wish I could write like this
this is SO GOOD!!!
ReplyDelete"I wrote your name on my arm but you didn't stick around
ReplyDeletelong enough for me to feel comfortable in short sleeves"
I could quote every line because they are all so good.
love this
ReplyDeleteThis is awesome. You used what we did today and freaking killed it. Poetry. Relevant. Fresh. Good job.
ReplyDelete"I wrote your name on my arm but then I remembered your
ReplyDeleteparents gave you that name along with a list of rules
regarding me.
I wrote your name on my arm but then I sat alone
on a Friday night. I thought about scraping
your name off of my arm.
I wrote your name on my arm but I didn't think twice about
dancing in the rain."
"I wrote your name on my arm but then I heard my
anatomy teachers voice saying
"all the layers of skin you can see are dead".
All the layers of skin you can see are dead,
and I wrote your name on my arm."
mmm this was good, those parts were my favorite ^^
Yeah this was unreal! Loved each and every line! The way you think and write is amazing!
ReplyDeleteLove it all, its so good and i love you! wanna be friends i think we could get along.
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ReplyDeleteWow. I'm speechless, your last line hit me.
ReplyDeleteWow. I'm speechless, your last line hit me.
ReplyDeleteI was trying to choose what to quote but then realized I'd have to do the whole thing.
ReplyDeletethe anatomy part though
ReplyDeleteSuper good.
wow. wow. wow. wow. can I just..... wow????
ReplyDelete"All the layers of skin you can see are dead,
ReplyDeleteand I wrote your name on my arm."
Wow
this is incredible
ReplyDeletehonestly so good. and feel good that this is your SEVENTEENTH comment you are killing it.
ReplyDeletenot that comments mean anything.
but dont they?
anyway, such a fan.
beautifully written.
10/10
ReplyDelete#Quality
ReplyDeleteholy wow wow wow this is so wonderful.
ReplyDeleteso beautiful I want it all
ReplyDeleteThis still gets me.
ReplyDelete"I wrote your name on my arm"
This post cut me open and put its self inside me
Makes me feeeeeel
Holy crap. This is seriously amazing i want to steal all of it I cant pick a favorite part!!!
ReplyDeleteHoly crap. This is seriously amazing i want to steal all of it I cant pick a favorite part!!!
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